荒野闲人 发表于 2022-12-27 08:18   全显示 1楼
楚大写作水平还是高，引人入胜。不过就是女性的名字都是使用时辰来代替，看的让人出戏。打个比方：世白左手搂着张强，右手抱着李坚，身下的赵刚全身赤裸跪扶着吞吐玉棒。
还有就是大量类似名字，需要更多点的精神才能分清人物。目前章节偏重在五姨娘还好，后期有群像戏的时候，什么梅家家主七兄弟加几个姨太太，很容易看错行。小小建议。
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